Thursday, January 27, 2011

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For my story my character will live in a town just like Milton. He will be in our grade and he will love to play sports. The story will be about him playing all the sports in Milton. He will win a few games and lose a few as well. If he tries his hardest and is fully dedicated to everything he does he may accomplish the greatest goal in any sport. A championship! He will play football, basketball, baseball and, hockey.  My short story will be based on this idea.
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  1. Myles MJanuary 27, 2011 at 6:32 PM

    andrew
    i like how you told us about what sports he plays but i think you could us more detail.
    myles

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  2. Christine CharbonneauJanuary 28, 2011 at 4:31 AM

    Thanks for posting, Andrew. My only concern is that there doesn't seem to be a conflict in this story. No offense, but if the story is only about the character playing sports, it will be kind of boring. There needs to be some kind of problem.

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